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Witness to the moment
In the presence of this smile
I stop to reflect and admire
At it's cunning look and guile

I heard so many stories
And now I stand and gaze upon
The glory of a bygone age
And all that has gone before

They taught me of the brush strokes
They taught me of the genius
That birthed the lady
That gave her life
And blessed us with such an enigmatic smile.

Her pose is staunch a little
Yet relaxed and so at ease
I wonder who this woman was
That she toys with us, the tease

The softness of her complexion
Yet somehow so rigid too
A woman dressed in refinery
And somehow, also so butch

I love the artists brush strokes
Because that's what they taught to me
And I love the background also
Of the rivers and the trees

They taught me of the brush strokes
They taught me of the history
Of the mystery
Of the lady
That was chosen to live for eternity

But I see her looking at me
And I will return the stare
Is she really smiling?
No actually, who cares?

Suddenly, I've fallen
And the woman speaks to me
I see such sadness in her eyes
Of lost, forgotten dreams.

Her hair, so flat and pretty
Yet the ends fizzle into curls
And is that a veil upon her
Shielding her from the world?

Her bosom closed and covered
Such detail in the cloth
Covering something so sacred
Or maybe to hide the flaws?

And the hands, refined, so delicate
Look so nervous in my eye
As if she doesn't want to be there
As if this lady is still shy

I stand back, and take a breath,
I see a woman and her face
With sadness and such lost beauty
And such sorrow to embrace

I swear I think she's crying
The smile I see so weak
I wish that I could hold her
Instead of study the technique

They taught me of the brush strokes
They taught me of the art
But they never taught me
To look beyond...


I look again
And she seems so alive.
I've seen a woman in canvas
And now, I think I truly see her smile...
©2005-2009 *dkami
:icondkami:

Author's Comments

Funny how I've seen her so many times... and yet I've always been led by what I've been told... but taking a moment, I got lost in there... and I found life.

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:iconhelldarkangel1:
omg!!!!! i LUV this poem!!!!!!! sooos ooo beautiful!! fantastic!!! :clap::clap::clap::clap:

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:blackrose:~helldarkangel1:blackrose:
there's a hole where my heart used to be,
he ripped it out
and he doesnt even know it.....
:icondkami:
Was a pleasure to write, too. I loved staring at the painting in question... I hope I don't need to say which painting it was I've found a new love for.
:iconhelldarkangel1:
nono..its ok...u dont hv to tell me! :D

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:blackrose:~helldarkangel1:blackrose:
there's a hole where my heart used to be,
he ripped it out
and he doesnt even know it.....
:iconex1:
Not really a visual person but it makes me think. Another reason why good imagery is appreciated. *smiles*

--
Death before dishonor. [link]

~Ex1
:icondkami:
A little lesson I taught myself here... sometimes, you don't need to put it all up-front, or be specific about what you are talking about. Sometimes the description, the vision, the emotion - sometimes that is all that is needed.

A little dig in there too... you can be taught the technique, but it is only ever half the story...
:icondkami:
Thank you. 'Twas fun.
:iconkai-ocean-breeze:
The way you play with words is really nice... so I'd assume you DID have fun!!
:icondkami:
Some days I like to play, other days I want to be commanding and dominant and... I think that should end right there. Heh heh! ^^

Always depends on where the mood takes you, I suppose...

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